Did I forget to talk about how much Milicent rules? I didn't mean to. She does!
You don't have conversations with yourself where one side tells you all the things you know, but don't want to acknowledge? Lucky. That's what the "nasty voice" sounds like to me.
I understand what it's supposed to be, but it doesn't _sound_ like Harry. "Leave him" and the "Ah" at the beginning of the second one... they read like Voldemort's dialogue.
Re: Part 2: Duels and Ancestry
You don't have conversations with yourself where one side tells you all the things you know, but don't want to acknowledge? Lucky. That's what the "nasty voice" sounds like to me.
I understand what it's supposed to be, but it doesn't _sound_ like Harry. "Leave him" and the "Ah" at the beginning of the second one... they read like Voldemort's dialogue.