ext_31620 ([identity profile] caesia390.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] pauraque_bk 2003-08-21 12:34 am (UTC)

I was looking up your LJ to comment on your voyeur!draco fic (which i sadly cannot remember the name of) and lo! I see my own name. >:}

not sure what GIP stands for. glad you like the icons. there's just something so seductive about the Death Eaters... to me, anyway. They're so EVIL. Heartless, shameless... Me with my iota of morality, I would draw the line at actually harming people. But I admire their ruthlessness.

Anyway.... Your fic!!! I loved the relationships you conveyed. Lucius's subtle domination of Severus, the tension as Severus resisted, felt... ashamed? More like embarrassed, I suppose, at being caught in a compromising position. And Lucius emphasizing his power by not acting ashamed at all.

Draco seemed a bit... soft. Perhaps just young. I dunno. It's not a specific grievance, just something that didn't entirely jive with my own mental picture of him.

However, I adore the interaction between Draco and Narcissa. The way they're extremely comfortable around each other, understanding each other but never expressing that understanding. The same thing is on both their minds, but Narcissa cuts herself off, and Draco barely says anything at all. I feel like I understand their entire relationship as well as the way they both view Lucius... The entire Malfoy household, really, just from that fic.

Ahhh so well done! Kudos.

I'm a Conservative Snapeist. I would call that Realist, but ah well... >:}

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