Here via Femme as well, and very glad to be so! I just loved this, how natural the seduction felt and all their unspoken things and their stupid imperfections which make the ending so heartbreaking. And I adore your eye for detail, like the stretched skin on Viktor's soles when he crouches and the semen in the water - little things that made me see the scenes in my mind's eye instead of just reading them. Brava!