Another question, as I look at the samples--I'm interested in why you chose to write Peter's example on lined paper as opposed to free-writing it on blank. It brings up an interesting insight into your possible take on Peter.

See, whenever someone has to confrom to using lined paper when they write has a greater need for guidelines in what he does. Also, any irregularities you see on the baseline of the handwriting has to be taken more into consideration than non-lined paper. As I look at your Peter sample, some of "his" words tend to fall underneath the line slightly--it means that the guidelines he's currently following are not making him happy--he is uncomfortable.

Interesting idea, yes?

Either that or you just had lined paper lying around.