I'm friending you because every time I read one of your Peter fics I have a minor heart attack, and I think I need a little more danger in my life.
-But the feedback. I'm not very good at that, but I think my reactions to most of your writing could be easily summed up in three words (Wow! *faints* *dies*) but I'll try and expend more, since this deserves it.
Firstly, I loved And Just Plain Wrong, and I loved Juxiantang's hints of Ron/Peter - but this interpretation of it was not something that even so much as lurked at the back of my imagination. Peter is so... Peter. Your descriptions of him - especially of his feet, you describe the way feet, normal feet, look perfectly, right down to that irritating line of crinkled skin one gets from the elastic of socks. And the way he thinks, and talks... with punishments, so threatened, so unsure of himself, and so needy (I was a little boy once.)
Ron's response to him was lovely; I liked the way you wrote this fic, though I admit I read it twice, because I was only skimming the Azkaban bits to read more of the Ron/Peter *feels guilty* but I especially loved how even in this, where it shouln't have been a metter of contest, Harry was beating him. And Ron knew it.
The little bit of Snape was absolutely perfect, also - his reaction to Harry and not to Ron.
And I cried at the ending. I don't do that a lot.
This, this was marvellously unsexy, so realistic and horrible and absolutely perfect. Thankyou!
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-But the feedback. I'm not very good at that, but I think my reactions to most of your writing could be easily summed up in three words (Wow! *faints* *dies*) but I'll try and expend more, since this deserves it.
Firstly, I loved And Just Plain Wrong, and I loved Juxiantang's hints of Ron/Peter - but this interpretation of it was not something that even so much as lurked at the back of my imagination. Peter is so... Peter. Your descriptions of him - especially of his feet, you describe the way feet, normal feet, look perfectly, right down to that irritating line of crinkled skin one gets from the elastic of socks. And the way he thinks, and talks... with punishments, so threatened, so unsure of himself, and so needy (I was a little boy once.)
Ron's response to him was lovely; I liked the way you wrote this fic, though I admit I read it twice, because I was only skimming the Azkaban bits to read more of the Ron/Peter *feels guilty* but I especially loved how even in this, where it shouln't have been a metter of contest, Harry was beating him. And Ron knew it.
The little bit of Snape was absolutely perfect, also - his reaction to Harry and not to Ron.
And I cried at the ending. I don't do that a lot.
This, this was marvellously unsexy, so realistic and horrible and absolutely perfect. Thankyou!