I went back and forth on the dates, but ultimately decided to keep them because the scenes are so similar in content, and I wanted to be certain it was clear that time was passing. I'd have preferred not to have them, but in such a short fic, sometimes one takes short-cuts.
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Date: 2004-07-01 10:51 am (UTC)'Kerb' is the British spelling of 'curb'.
Thanks for your feedback. :)