This is kind of interesting, because I thought that what happened after him looking into Snape's pensieve was rather realistic; he got some unflattering info, and when he was discovered he had to face Snape's anger and subsequent refusal to continue the lessons. On top of that he felt guilty, and regretted his actions.
I don't know what else you would think was needed? (And I know this might not sound the way I want it to in writing; I'm just curious. I'm truly not trying to start an argument here!)
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Date: 2006-02-02 10:50 am (UTC)I don't know what else you would think was needed? (And I know this might not sound the way I want it to in writing; I'm just curious. I'm truly not trying to start an argument here!)