It feels like I'm obligating you to read/comment, but since you offered, I would love to know your opinion of The Devil is a Liar. (Also on hp.pfen.net) Looking back, there are some things I'd do differently, but I'm really pleased with how the characterizations turned out. I was also going for a hot-yet-realistic sexual encounter, and I think (hope!) I managed that as well.
I can't resist!
Date: 2004-09-06 08:53 am (UTC)