This must have been pretty hard and/or a riot -- looking back at my old drawings is like that, except they get burnt into my eyes and don't leave me until I can replace them by making new ones.
The river of students flows around Cedric as he walks through the corridor, like they're characters in a dream, not even aware of his presence as they brush easily against him.
At first I didn't like this either, but the second I switch out "not even aware" to "unaware", I find the sentence works. It's visceral and sets a mood, anyway. A few of these are really good, though much like Amy, I am glad to see you are apparently as hard on your self as I am.
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Date: 2008-09-01 06:20 pm (UTC)The river of students flows around Cedric as he walks through the corridor, like they're characters in a dream, not even aware of his presence as they brush easily against him.
At first I didn't like this either, but the second I switch out "not even aware" to "unaware", I find the sentence works. It's visceral and sets a mood, anyway. A few of these are really good, though much like Amy, I am glad to see you are apparently as hard on your self as I am.