While reading this I was keeping in mind your penchant for twisty bits. Because the beginning is so ordinary, I kept thinking, twisty bit approaching, wait for it, waaait for it...and read right past it, then did a big, "Hold up!" a few seconds later. XD
I like how it was right in the middle of that piece of gratuitous teacher advice that fictional people always have to give. Ha!
You write about Lupin's insecurity about Sirius and his memories of him and his guilt over the PoA affairs in one word! One word! w00t.
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Date: 2004-07-25 09:31 am (UTC)While reading this I was keeping in mind your penchant for twisty bits. Because the beginning is so ordinary, I kept thinking, twisty bit approaching, wait for it, waaait for it...and read right past it, then did a big, "Hold up!" a few seconds later. XD
I like how it was right in the middle of that piece of gratuitous teacher advice that fictional people always have to give. Ha!
You write about Lupin's insecurity about Sirius and his memories of him and his guilt over the PoA affairs in one word! One word! w00t.