beta reader sought

[pauraque_bk]

Harry Potter, 2800 words. It's Peter/Ron, and explicit. Not underage, but pretty messed up all the same, as you might imagine. This is for the Peter Pettigrew FQF, which ends on November 15. I want honest opinions on whether what I'm doing works, and if it doesn't, what I can do to change it.

If you're interested, drop me a line: eo at morosophy dot com

Comments

[caesia390.livejournal.com]

I am far too lazy to email you, but I'd love to take a look at it! ^_^ caesia390@hotmail.com if you're sending it that way

[pauraque]

Cool, thank you! I solicited emails because I figured some people wouldn't like to post their addresses publicly, and I wouldn't want to lose their input because of that. Anyway, sending it your way.