Titular poems.
Sep. 20th, 2005 11:14 pmI know Post A Poem Day was yesterday, but then
atrata posted a poem from which she got the title of a fic, and well... self-indulgence is a nice thing.
switchknife's birthday, and at the last minute had a minor panic realizing that I'd forgotten to think up a title! The first thing I thought of was Stephen Crane, whose poetry I like very much. The long poem Black Riders had the right kind of desolate ache that I hoped would come across in the fic, but Crane uses such deceptively bare language that it was hard to find a good phrase to steal.
Actually, the verse I thought fit the story best was this one:
The relevance of which I hope is apparent if you've read the fic. It just didn't suggest a good title.
O mistress mine, where are you roaming?I wanted a punning title for Sweet and Twenty, which was for a candy-themed challenge, and I guess I was going for an ironic suggestion of Remus's bitterly remembered youth.
O, stay and hear! your true love's coming,
That can sing both high and low:
Trip no further, pretty sweeting;
Journeys end in lovers meeting,
Every wise man's son doth know.
What is love? 'tis not hereafter;
Present mirth hath present laughter;
What's to come is still unsure:
In delay there lies no plenty;
Then come kiss me, sweet-and-twenty!
Youth's a stuff will not endure.
-William Shakespeare
XIII-I had to rush to finish For gods to menace fools (NC-17) in time for
If there is a witness to my little life,
To my tiny throes and struggles,
He sees a fool;
And it is not fine for gods to menace fools.
-Stephen Crane
Actually, the verse I thought fit the story best was this one:
XX-
A learned man came to me once.
He said, "I know the way, -- come."
And I was overjoyed at this.
Together we hastened.
Soon, too soon, were we
Where my eyes were useless,
And I knew not the ways of my feet.
I clung to the hand of my friend;
But at last he cried, "I am lost."
The relevance of which I hope is apparent if you've read the fic. It just didn't suggest a good title.